the girls in this video come across as sexual and of a low status as they are ornamental and a just for show but in essence not actually of any importance.
As you can clearly see the girls are coming across very sexual and this is portrayed negatively due to the touching and holding of private areas.
The one or two points you make have real potential but as there aren't any examples, or any explanation you cannot get higher than an E grade.
T: Find examples and apply them to your chosen videos to help you fully explain your points. Use PEE - Point Evidence Explanation